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The king of arret

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The king of arret is a strong brave man who lead a small group of survivors to safety deep underground during the supernova of the hetra system's sun, he is considered a hero and warrior, this is not him. This person may look like the once great king, however they are only a parasite of which took over his body during the survival. This parasite was a test by makuta teridax that would help preserve his mind in another's body. The parasite however could not completely take over and still was forced to obey the king's will to protect the people of arret. However slowly the parasite began gaining power, and while currently the king's will still prevails, the parasite slowly gains power, and teridax's will begins to emerge up to this day. It will only be a matter of time before he has lost this mental battle. His will is slowly corrupted to this point of being a war bound cruel leader, so while his reasons may be good, his actions aren't.
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Please do not take what you are about to read as an insult. Think of it as constructive criticism and you will improve.

Okay where to start.
The torso is much to wide. Considering the head being used it is completely out of proportion. The waist especially is too wide. The feet are much too large and frankly they look a bit funny. It looks somewhat out of place and is just strange overall. the loincloth looks a little weird because loincloths typically only look nice on thinner mocs. Also in the future if you want to make a loincloth get some heavy fabric and cut a thinner piece. It looks nicer because the fabric falls better without sticking in the air. Heavier fabrics fall straight down. If his cape reached the floor it would look better because it makes him look more powerful. Sometimes you can even take it as far as a bunch of fabric pooling at his feet.
My advice to you would be to decrease the number of mocs you have. Quality over quantity. A golden rule. Use the extra pieces from dismantled mocs and start experimenting with one moc. Try to get the one mocs to look as amazing as you can. Get some advice on the moc. Improve it more. Then when it is as fantastic as you can make it with your current ability. Move on to another one. Rinse and repeat. The number of mocs will be less but the quality of the mocs will be greatly increased. Well that's all I have to say. Have fun!